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I really feel you can do better work then what I viewed.  Try to spend more time on your assignments and double check your work.  I like your back round you designed for this assignment.   Just try to put more effort in your work.

CONCLUSION

 In conclusion I belive that this semester I did not put in my 100 % of hard work. I think that if I  did better on my essay then I could have more things to present and that follws the traits really well.
In the next semester my goal is to study more hard and there so I can have more evidence for my next profolio. All in all Ibelive that this is not my best work and i can do better. I hope for next semester that this will be ten times better.

WORD CHOICE

this semester i had not so good word choices and i think i could of did better one of my problems where that i kept on usingthe same word over and over again which made my essays boring. But here is one that i thing i did pretty good on.

this is one and i think the best one of my word choices

VOICE

well in voice i really shown not alot of them during these essays and most of all when i did have voice in my essya they werent so strong as the could of been

this was one of them my roots and recipie essay where alot of my voice came out in this essay

ORGANIZATION

This is one of my good organization essays and it was wellorganized to go in to a good kc3 essay

IDEAS

this is one of my essays that i have good ideas and it was good but just in the way i wrote it it came out diffrent but my ideas of this essay was on the point

this was another one that my ideas were good but how i wrote it was bad

My progress as a learner this semester

    This semester I  did alot of things in class that has though me alot. The new learning that I have learned is how to use more sensory details in my writing and thats how I can make my writing more intresting an keeping my reader a wake threw the whole story. The iteams that I will show in this blog is all the thigs that I have shown progress threw this semester. This semester I have achived my reading goal to better my self by writting more compleated essays and well thought essay's.